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I'm kinda proud. very proud.
HUMAN STUFF :'D
I hope you like it c:

They are ~TakomaKittys and my yuri couple,
Samira and Kym

Art and Kym © Me, =Evovictim
Samira © ~TakomaKitty
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Critiques because.
First of all, I'd like to point out that this is a wonderful artwork, I know you usually draw animals but I don't really think it shows. Your anatomy isn't off at all (from my point of view I'd say the heads are kind of big and the bodies kind of thin, but since this is a manga-ish style I think that's what you were aiming for), you actually draw the hands right (lemme tell you, lots of people struggle with that!) and well, the overall vision is great c: There's just some little details that you could change, but in general, this is good.

I like the shine on the hair, however, I feel like you should've added more of that shine on the rest of the hair. Now it's just on one part, which is a bit weird if you look at it for a while. I would've added darker shading on certain parts of the hair, too.
As for the rest of the shading: it looks good, but it looks like it's a little bit randomly added. There's no super obvious light source, I guess it's coming from the fromt but some parts contradict that as there's some shading on skin that should be hit by front light and other non-shaded parts should be shaded. It's not super obvious in here, but it's a good way to give your drawings just that little bit extra. ;)
The wings look good, but it's kind of a shame that there's still part of the wings that's just bland grey without feather structures. You coul've added some light in there, or more feathers, I think that would've looked better.

But like I said, the picture is very nice overall and I really like this. I love the decoration, too: the heart is nice and so is the frame. You did very great, keep it up!
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Okay erst mal - ich finde es total hübsch C:
vision: also wenn man raufschaut sieht es erstmal unglaublich toll aus, die farben bilden einen wunderschönen kontrast, zwischen den dunklen flügeln und der hellen haut. Ich finds toll, das es zwei verschiedene Hautfarben sind, dass sieht man nicht oft bei mangabildern :D. Die Anatomie an sich, finde ich auch gut, sie ist sehr realistisch, nur die Hände sind noch nicht ganz so gut. Also zeichentechnisch, von der Haltung der Finger her ist es ziemlich gut, aber ich finde die Hände etwas klein, entweder müsste vlt die ganze Hand etwas größer, oder aber die einzelnen Finger etwas länger c:
Auch das Shadding mag ich sehr, weil ich persöhnlich kein cell shadding kann, und es daher immer sehr erstaunlich finde. Aber bei der Haut der Mädels könnte es etwas mehr shading sein, du hast fast immer nir am Rand der einzelnen Flächen entlang geshaddet, dadurch gibt es zwar einerseits eine schöne Dreidimensionalität, aber andererseits fehlt mir etwas farbliche tiefe, falls du verstehst was ich meine CX. Dafür sind die Haare aber total toll geworden :D
Originality: Originel ist es auf jeden fall, ich mag es wie du die herzform den hintergrundes in den Flügeln nocheinmal aufgegriffen hast, dadurch wirkt es sehr harmonisch. Auch die schwarzen Elemente auf dem weißen gefallen mir sehr, sie lenken nicht von dem eigentlich motiv ab, sondern runden einfach die stimmung des bilders ab. außerdem finde ich es gut, das du dich getraut hast, ihnen keine klamotten anzuziehen XD
Ja, was soll ich zur Technik anderes sagen, als das ich es awesome finde. Ich liebe deine Bilder und zum shadding hab ich auch schon was gesagt, von daher ^^
Keine Ahnung was Impact ist, daher geb ich dir da einfach mal ein paar sterne so, das es in bild passt ^^
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BlackLightning95 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist
owow das ist so dermaßen toll 8D....es sieht so schön aus und die farben passen super...echt schön :)
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Sorasongz Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Danke c:

BLÄCKLEITNINGFÜNFUNZNEUNZIK
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BlackLightning95 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist
xDDDDD hahah np^^
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LordNative Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Hurr sexy XD

Ich finde es klasse ouo
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Sorasongz Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
danke cx
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ChristelAustin Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Veryyyy Beautiful O_O
I never can draw better XD
I love the Colours of the Skin! Dark and Light. And the blacj Wings-OMG I must die. Soooo awesome!
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Sorasongz Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you!
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ChristelAustin Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You´re Welcome :)
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SterniPsycho Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omj o.o das is einfach mal geil muss ich sagen! :3 das gefällt mir gut und dieses shading D:< nah ich bring dich noch um weil du geil zeichnest xD
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Sorasongz Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Eh... Danke xD
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MiaTheMonster Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nagisch xDD sieht echt Geil aus
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Sorasongz Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dangüü
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MiaTheMonster Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nzd ^^
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Arkiva Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesomee.. ;u;
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Sorasongz Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Danke cx
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Arkiva Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
np :3
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MysaTheUnknown Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Oh gott, es ist so awesome geworden Gaylord *-*
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Sorasongz Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Danke *-*
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MysaTheUnknown Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Bittefein *-*
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TakomaKitty Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG EPIIISCH :nuu:
Ich habs dir ja schon im Join gesagt (...glaub ich), es ist einfach... tja, es ist einfach... geil xD (wie du schon sagtest, geil mit zwei Bedeutungen o.o)
Aber sagtest du nicht, dass du ihnen noch Kleidung machst? :b
Aber, wie auch immer, es ist episch, kannst ruhig stolz sein :la:
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Sorasongz Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nein ich sagte das ich auf dem ref kleidung mache und sie auf dem bild nackt sind XDD
Danke Takiii <333
XDD
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LeNaira Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ich finde das Ergebnis echt episch o3o
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Sorasongz Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Vielen dank :3
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oOSchokoOo Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nackidei :iconlawooplz: XD Ne echt total schön geworden *o*
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Sorasongz Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Jahaa xD meine sis vorhin so: bah. Die sind ja nackt.
Und ich dann: LASS SIE DOCH WENN SIE SPASS DRANN HABEN UVU

danke x)
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oOSchokoOo Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD guute antwort 8D
bidde o3o
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Sorasongz Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XDD
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SpitfiresOnIce Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You so good at humans already :iconcryforeverplz:
Great picture! Love those wings, and the whole thing in general :la: Great work! c:
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Sorasongz Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you bienie <3333
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SpitfiresOnIce Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome! :happybounce:
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Sorasongz Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:3
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